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Thursday, February 25, 2010

While walking


in whipping wind
a palm frond squawk-squawks:
new kind of crow

37 comments:

  1. Nice Haiku, Tricia.

    Funny....I was walking yesterday and took a similar picture, but looking up at wintering Queen Anne's Lace.

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  2. Beautiful haiku and the photo is magic. Makes me feel as though I'm lying on my back looking up at the trees - something I love to do.

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  3. You have an elegant way with words.

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  4. Yay, you kept your haiku promise to us. Lying under wind-blown palms gives me a feeling of flight.

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  5. I can certainly imagine the whipping wind! Seems we've had lots of it lately. This Haiku is full of imagery. Loved it!

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  6. Yvonne: Like minds. :D

    VR: Thanks. These palms, Queen, I think, are so very, very tall. They tower, but I noticed these two leaning towards each other and couldn't resist the shot.

    Thank you, Tamika! Elegant is a mighty fine word to bestow. :)

    Donna: I believe in promises and dreams and wishes and flying. ;)

    Thank you, Catherine! I love playing with imagery.

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  7. Yat-Yee & Elle & PJ---Thank you so much, friends!

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  8. Tricia--I have a feeling you talked about using all of your senses to observe the world around you at the conference you just went to. :-)

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  9. You are a poet. Do you know it?

    :)

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  10. Yes! Palms can squawk-squawk. Oh...and I've given you an AWARD Tricia. Come on and check it out.

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  11. I have a plan frond in the opening scene of my WIP! :)
    No crows though. :(

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  12. Ok, it's been way too long since I've seen a palm tree. I love your posts because they make me feel like I've been on a walk with you!

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  13. Your words perfectly match that image. I love it!

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  14. Sharon: This panel was speaking primarily about place, but I have always found that being in nature makes me hyper aware of my senses. Almost as though they are awakened, renewed.

    Terresa: hee-hee. Wonderful words from you--an amazing poet.

    Bish: I knew you would have heard them speak. ;) I'll be on over, thank you.

    Karen: One year during a West Nile outbreak all the crows disappeared. It was very eerie not to see them around, strutting and cawing.

    LiLa: I love to think you are along for my walks. :)

    Thanks BJ!

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  15. You do haiku

    hey, that rhymes :D

    you do it well.

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  16. We've been having fun with haiku in this house. You do it much better than we do!

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  17. I can hear it! I can hear it!!!

    Jsut beautiful, Tricia. And the photograph? Stunning.

    I long to see a palm tree right now. To hear it swishing in the wind...a new kind of crow. ;)

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  18. Really lovely, Tricia. You are a haiku queen!

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  19. I was sitting at the beach today, without my camera, looking at three rows of different colored clouds and I thought of Tricia, who loves the sky. I don't know palm trees, so this helped me learn.

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  20. Tess: Ha! I love that, thanks.

    Sherrie: How wonderful you are playing with haiku. I love the way it lets me give a flash picture of something in nature.

    Carolina: Yay, you made my day! I'm glad I brought it to you.

    Mel: Aw, shucks. Should I get a tiara?

    Liza: Oh, I'm honored you thought of me when looking at the sky. Palm trees come in so many varieties, but these were the super tall ones.

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  21. Nice haiku Pat. I ain't kidding. =)

    I have started my foray into the lovely world of haiku. Maybe after a while, I shall share some with you. ONLY YOU! =)

    Happy weekend.

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  22. so cool.

    Can you see the face in the clouds?

    Shelley

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  23. Hi Shelley: Oh my, I hadn't seen that face until you sent me looking for it. Very defined lips and big nose--a giant of sorts.

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  24. Robyn! I didn't see you there. You must've been hiding. Come out, come out and whisper your haiku.
    Happy weekend to you, too.

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  25. Great pic and Haiku. I can just picture then waving in the wind, creaking and swishing. Those things are so TALL!

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  26. Angela: Thank you--wonderful praise from you! They are so tall. I once watched a tree trimmer, who was a native of Samoa, get stuck when he went up. It was scary for a bit but he made it down okay.

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  27. Beautiful picture - makes me excited for summer weather and blue skies (palm trees would be nice, too...)

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  28. Welcome, Susan! Summer's on the way. :D

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  29. Gorgeous picture as always. The sight of palm trees makes my heart long for summer someplace warm and bright. Love the haiku - I can see the trees swaying in the wind.

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