Contest time at The Merry Sisters of Fate. Randomly-chosen winners are trying for a signed advance reader’s copy of THE SCORPIO RACES by Maggie Stiefvater, a signed advance reader’s copy of THE SPACE BETWEEN by Brenna Yovanoff or a signed hardback of BLOOD MAGIC by Tessa Gratton. The authors are the sisters of fate, if you didn’t know.
The picture prompt for this contest is “The Turret Stairs” by Frederic Burton, and here’s my entry, a flash fiction:
He has no choice. Those are his words, not mine. I feel them like a shard of glass, a needle of ice through my heart.
This is the last time—I have no doubt of this—he will press his body to mine, the final touch of soft lips, hot breath upon my neck.
I cannot look at him.
“I am the kingdom,” he says, as though I need convincing. “What I desire, what I prefer, must always be for the good of all.”
Am I not part of all? But I do not speak those words or any other.
My hand rests on stone, cold as a tomb, centuries of terror held captive in these walls. I must climb into the darkness alone while he will step into the light of ten thousand candles and as many dawns.
“It was your hair, they say, that made them so sure.” He loops the end of my braid around his finger—a red-copper ring. A moan escapes him. He pulls his dagger free and cuts the lock, holding it first to his nose and then tucking it within his shirt. “I will mourn you always.”
I face him finally. “You will mourn, and you will suffer every moment of my eternal imprisonment. I would rather they’d sewn a hundred river stones in my hem or made me run in iron boots fresh from the fire than the end you chose. For you did have a choice, you see.”
“I could not sentence you to such a death!”
“But you have, my love, you have.”
The picture prompt for this contest is “The Turret Stairs” by Frederic Burton, and here’s my entry, a flash fiction:
He has no choice. Those are his words, not mine. I feel them like a shard of glass, a needle of ice through my heart.
This is the last time—I have no doubt of this—he will press his body to mine, the final touch of soft lips, hot breath upon my neck.
I cannot look at him.
“I am the kingdom,” he says, as though I need convincing. “What I desire, what I prefer, must always be for the good of all.”
Am I not part of all? But I do not speak those words or any other.
My hand rests on stone, cold as a tomb, centuries of terror held captive in these walls. I must climb into the darkness alone while he will step into the light of ten thousand candles and as many dawns.
“It was your hair, they say, that made them so sure.” He loops the end of my braid around his finger—a red-copper ring. A moan escapes him. He pulls his dagger free and cuts the lock, holding it first to his nose and then tucking it within his shirt. “I will mourn you always.”
I face him finally. “You will mourn, and you will suffer every moment of my eternal imprisonment. I would rather they’d sewn a hundred river stones in my hem or made me run in iron boots fresh from the fire than the end you chose. For you did have a choice, you see.”
“I could not sentence you to such a death!”
“But you have, my love, you have.”
28 comments:
TRICIA!This is awesome!
"I am the kingdom"
love it.
You have such a great voice for medieval fantasy...
Wow. So few words. So impressed with your creativity, as always.
Shelley: Oh, my, thank you. Crimey (is that a word?), that makes me feel rather awesome.
Yat-Yee: Double oh-my. Thank you so much, too!
Chills, chills, I say! Fantastic job!!
ValerieG: :):):) I'm a flutter.
And Shelley on my crimey comment. I realize I melded crikey and criminy and still don't know what I'm talking about.
Oh that was awesome and heartbreaking! Great job!
That is so darn good, Tricia! Kick ass, in fact! I love that last line. Actually, I love all the lines. Beeeeeaaaautiful!
I love the description in this piece!
Great last line.
ValerieK: Ooooo, thank you so much. I loved your entry and wouldn't have known about this if you hadn't posted, so thank you!
Wen: I love to kick ass! Thankee. :D
GoldenEagle: I'm so incredibly pleased to hear it. *all smiley*
WOW, this was brilliant--I love this! Now write the book. Yes, I mean that--get to work! :)
Angela @ The Bookshelf Muse
Wow. That was totally swoon-worthy. Please tell me you're going to make that into a book.
Gorgeous!
Awesome Tricia. But then, I would not expect anything less. You have such a way with words, so lyrical, haunting.
Angela: You're a hard taskmistress! This one isn't a book, just a flash in the pan, but I'm encouraged to dig deeper into the dark fairy tale I'm currently writing.
Stephanie: Eeps! You, guys! Now, I'm swooning.
Bish: Oh, thank you, thank you, dear friend.
oooh -- this is beautiful!!! Very evocative -- and perfectly suited to the painting.
Jo: Thanks for stopping by and the lovely comment.
Gee, Tricia can you come over and write something for me? Lovely tone, rhythm and style.
Tricia, this is AMAZING! And now I wanna know why her hair made them sure.
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Lee: hahahahahaha! I'd love to come over. Maybe we could write for each other. ;)
Catherine: A mystery forevermore. Sorry, couldn't resist. Thank you!
Oooh. Passion and tragedy. You're mastering flash fiction, but then, of course you would. It's fiction haiku.
Donna: Oooh. I love that--'fiction haiku' It's a perfect description. And thanks!
This is so wonderful, Tricia, the setting, the, characters, the build of emotion. I'm not sure what else to say. Good grief, I'm speechless. Don't tell anyone.
Sucker punch to the heart - well done!
VR: !!!
Jemi: *gasp*
I love you guys!
Wow... beautiful, amazing. I am so captivated, and I want to read more!
(I also want her to turn him into a toad.) ;)
Ha, Phoenix, he should be turned into a toad! :)
WOW! LOVE this, Tricia. Fantastic story!
"I must climb into the darkness alone while he will step into the light of ten thousand candles and as many dawns."
*sigh*
Write a whole story about these characters. Please and thank you.
Talli: Eeee! Thank you.
Oh, Karen, these characters have a short shelf life. I made them up for that flash fic and the contest, but I hope someday you get to read my new dark fairy tale and my rewritten mer story (I've got plans). ;)
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